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Not really too much to say here this time around. Except nice work with the focusing on Ozy, and the whole "somebody has to save the world" bit and all. And it works pretty well, because each character gets their own little focus, and he doesn't stand out.

Nicely done.

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Jan. 7th, 2010 05:45 am (UTC)
Yeah, I think one of the big focuses (foci?) of the work (sorta fitting in with "Who Watches the Watchmen?") is that if there really were superheroes running around, it would only probably partly be the nice shiny guys who want justice, and even they're not perfect - a lot of them would be the powerhungry types, or attention whores or what have you, rather than actual, y'know, heroes.
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