Such a melodramatic introduction to a new client! Yeesh.
You'd think that if a coronet is so very valuable, it wouldn't be put up for collateral in the first place. I mean come on, there HAS to be something else that someone in such a lofty position could use! Especially if the coronet is public property in the first place! How could it even be used as collateral in a private loan? Handwaviness ensues, I guess.
And then Holder compounds the stupidity by taking the thing OUT of the bank itself, which is intended to be secure, and not only taking it home with him, but then telling people about it! Gah. How did a guy like this get to such a high position in business, again?
Mary is "not so very young" remember... she's a whole twenty-four! Gah, making me feel old and crumbly, much?
I also sincerely hope that the coronet can be easily mended, considering that it's been broken and twisted horribly! I mean, with the return of the stones everyone seems to be acting like it's all hunky dory (and granted, that was apparently the big issue since the stones were irreplaceable), but I'd imagine there are still going to be some uncomfortable questions from the guy who left the coronet in the first place!
Despite the awkward points - the handwaviness in the setup, mostly - I tend to like this story. I don't know why, I guess maybe because it has a decent blend of setup, drama, action, and bittersweet endings.
The pitiful remnants of the schedule